crit

When taking my illustrations to the crit it was suggested that the colour palette was highly successful at targeting females and even the pale versions of 'male' colours appealed to a female demographic as research had been conducted into different hues targeting diffrent sexs. It was also suggested that the illustrations explored a comical way to express being tipsy, a factor in which would widely appeal that of a younger demographic.

When exploring sketches for the layout it was suggested that designs in which highlighted the title appeared most effective. This including titles in which appeared at the top of the page. It was also suggested that when the title appears below the text it feels irrelevant as the information has already been exhibited. The odd approach was highlighted as a way in which would entice the consumer to read the information as it appears lively, whereas on the other hand the grid format appears clear concise and easy to navigate. During the next design stage I will explore with ways in which my composition will appear, focusing upon the title as a main point.