Critique

When discussing my card designs with my peers varied feedback was received. Some of the key points have been outlined below:



Cocktails

When discussing the idea of cocktails it became apparent that people of the Islamic faith do not drink and thus this may exclude them from buying the card. In conjunction to this another peer suggested that the cocktails do not actually state alcohol and that the drink may be expressed as a mocktail.


Composition 

Patterns seem to be outlined throughout the design although it is fair to suggest that in some cases the pattern is not used and thus this must be resolved. In the heart approach the design also overlaps and does not follow the line grid pattern as the others. In order to develop a set it is important that this is resolved.


Colour Scheme

It was suggested that the colour scheme used was exciting and innovative, and thus would stand out commercially. One suggestion in which was made was that the bright nature of the Rose card did not comply to this theme and thus it should be altered to a pastel.


Concept 

The designs were said to be versatile and non-offensive, an ideology in which I had attempted to express throughout.



From the feedback received it is evident that small alterations must be made before the designs are submitted in order to express a stronger set. Once these have been completed a strong set will be expressed.